D#6, HW#3

When writing my research proposal I did a lot of things differently. A lot of people said that I didn't really have a voice in my paper and that you couldn't tell what side I was on or what my views were. So, when I was revising my paper I worked pretty hard to incorporate my personality and my opinion on the subject. I found that when writing my papers it is much easier for me to write out a list of ideas or points I want to write on, where I want to put them and from there adding more writing more details along with giving supporting evidence. I think from now on when I write my papers I'll stick to this technique. I think the main thing I'm really concerned about when writing this is getting ahold of people to interview. I've read plenty of websites and some books about profilers. I've got almost all of the history information down and most of the techinical terms and processes down. The only thing I can do is just call a bunch of people at the Phoenix Police Department and hope to get someone who can help me.